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Writing addendums for graduate applications - 5/11/2008 3:19:21 PM
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solo_soprano22
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I'm applying for graduate school sometime next semester (or in January). Several people (professors and others) have told me that I should write a short addendum to my application about the semesters that were affected by illness (four semesters, but three semesters mainly-- the three after my first freshman semester). The first two semesters I tried to tough it out (not a good idea), and my grades suffered...then that third semester I got so bad that I had to withdraw completely and have emergency surgery. (The withdrawals show up on the transcript.)
Other than the terrible grades in those two semesters, I've made only one C...but the bad semesters were such that I can only recover so much, even if I make all A's. I'm still very ill, but I'm trying to manage/plan my classes betterl to accommodate the disorders (they're pain disorders).
I'm not sure how I'm supposed to word it, and what to put in/leave out. Is there a site that can give me some tips?
TIA
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RE: Writing addendums for graduate applications - 5/15/2008 9:42:47 PM
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zahra
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It seems like your professors are saying you have some major red flags in your transcript that need some explanation, without which the selection committees might not consider your application.
I think they would be very suspicious of any statement that implies "It was totally not my fault." While that may be true, what will probably impress them a lot more is a statement that truthfully acknowledges any personal responsibility (or mistakes) that contributed to the withdrawals. Tell them what your difficult circumstances were (these were definitely not your fault). Also demonstrate that you are a mature person who has been able to reflect on what you struggled with. Acknowledge what you might have done differently if you could do it again. Be humble and honest; avoid being defensive.
I'm not sure I know of any good examples of such addendums. There is probably no great way to say this. Write it as a formal letter ("Dear Selection Committee:") if it helps you get your thoughts down, and then just show it to some people you know whose judgment you trust. :)
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RE: Writing addendums for graduate applications - 5/16/2008 12:12:56 PM
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Row1
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it is a good idea to include a decent explanation somewhere in the application.
i think that i would explain that, at a certain span of time, you dealt with some health issues that included some hospital stays, plus has required you to learn how to manage a chronic illness much earlier in life than many (but not all) people do.
plus, i would avoid details of all this. they don't need to know if you have pain, diabetes, a colostomy bag, a fake leg, controlled seizure disorder, whatever. they just don't need to know any details.
they just need to know: this came upon you, it affected grades, and now, currently, you have learned what the condition is, and how to manage it, and you now are fully capable of pursuing whatever degree or program.
that shows maturity, plus allows you privacy, plus makes the low grades understandable.
you really could knock this out in one decent paragraph actually in the essay. i would figure out someone in your life who would be good at reviewing how this comes across. the 'spin' will be important. you are 'selling' yourself as a potential student where there is apparently some competition.
also, if you are also giving any letters of recommendation, if the recommender knows the situation, they can repeat this same message, and report that they have confidence in your ability, plus they see the grade/illness issue as a reason for some low grades, rather than low ability being the cause of low grades.
I have prayed for you in this app process! Good luck!
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I didn't have a ton of bad grades before; it's just that the ones caused by my inability to be in class are the ones that initially brought down my gpa.
