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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 4:42:48 PM
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pk07
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Notice that I never even bother to post any of my writings in here. Haha!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 4:43:24 PM
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RatherDashing
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I can't write either.
I beg to differ.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 5:00:31 PM
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Rocker4christ123
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These are the songs but remember they are unfinished,unedited uncut and written by a major ameature !!!!
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D-NOW Song
Chorus :I call to you and you answer me
you are amazing God
Teach me your way and I will walk in your truth
give me an un-divided heart
give me an un-divided heart
Barbie dolls tm
Verse 1:
I'm sick and tired of this conformity
letting others make the choices for me
no,no this stops right now
so find another barbie doll to show and tell
I'm who iam so deal with it
i forgive your imperfections so cut me some slack
Verse 2:TBA !!!
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Shadows fill an empty heart
As love is fading,
From all the things that we are
But are not saying.
Can we see beyond the scars
And make it to the dawn?
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 6:29:13 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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well i have songs 2. and these r christians is it ok if i put them up here? =/
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 6:38:19 PM
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rebelyell
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i think so. id love to see them.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 6:47:13 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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well.. ok =}
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 7:08:13 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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O Hallelujah
Verse 1- We are the sheep, you are the shepard we need your gudicence O Holy One, to guide us i nthat Holy Gate to help us win the victory.
Chorus- O father we all know things are not impossible for you, you are the potter we are the clay so please mold us we pray.
Verse 2- O Holy one please mold us and guide us we pray, you are the one who can save us O Hallelujah!
Verse 3- when we get to that Holy place O what rejoicing there will be we'll get to meet our blessed Savior O Hallelujah!
Chorus 2- O Hallelujah! what amazing grace, that he saved us, through his grace, O Hallelujah! Praise the Lord, for his kindness and Holy son!
Verse/chorus 4- O Father we cant wait to meet u up there in your place, O what excitment, O what grace we just pray u come today!
Oh,Jesus
Verse 1- Jesus,what a wonderful Savior that he would die for me they put nails in his hands but those nails were actually ours.
Chorus- he died on that cross for me and you so we could live and not die what a brave and honest man that he would take that price from our hands.
Verse 2- now on the third day he rose again O what victory O life divine,.... When i heard this story I got on my knees I asked the Savior to forgive me he washed me in his blood now i'm here because of him.
Verse 3-O how Jesus is so great he died for me and rose again it seems I love this story because he gave his life for me.
(now this kind of like paragraph u dont sing u say it)
And I'm glad he did because I would not be here today if it wasnt for him so please sinner come to God because he loves u no matter what u do he has his arms open wide ready for u to say O.K. Lord i'm sorry for what I did please forgive me and make me a child of God and he will forgive u because he died for u thats why he came down to this earth so u would live and not die because of sins and Just for u to know he came down to fulfill what the bible said and what the bible said and what it was saying is that since we have sinned we had to die but Jesus took that puishment for u so ask him to coem into your heart today, tomorrow maybe to late so please get saved today!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 8:15:12 PM
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1love1God1way
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hold your heaven to my heart
I sit and wait to taste rain of bittersweetness as surely as dawn rises so will illumination and carelessness be life and blinding death my heart please take one more day to know that hope ceases not by time nor mythical love and loneliness shall convince this truth not how i yearn
for touch and feel of beauty in your eyes whispering melodies and divinely dancing making my soul unfold and rewind to simple joy where monsters vanish and light and dreams break my shadows fallen out of fear that rejection awaits the peasant who dons knightship
to slay barriers to
holding your heaven to my heart.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 8:18:18 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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quote:
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hold your heaven to my heart
I sit and wait to taste rain of bittersweetness as surely as dawn rises so will illumination and carelessness be life and blinding death my heart please take one more day to know that hope ceases not by time nor mythical love and loneliness shall convince this truth not how i yearn
for touch and feel of beauty in your eyes whispering melodies and divinely dancing making my soul unfold and rewind to simple joy where monsters vanish and light and dreams break my shadows fallen out of fear that rejection awaits the peasant who dons knightship
to slay barriers to
holding your heaven to my heart.
hey there! been like a long time since i have talked to u! how have u been!?
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 8:31:48 PM
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1love1God1way
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Doing alright.
I don't poke in XT much, being that I am not a T, and lately lacking in the X part. . .
But I thought it would be fun to share a poem.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 8:33:50 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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ohhh. well i hope u liked my songs.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 8:34:37 PM
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1love1God1way
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Indeed.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 8:39:37 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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=}
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 9:16:32 PM
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rebelyell
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good job Cassie.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 9:17:13 PM
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ShutterBox
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speaking of missing Bens..... BenQuebec like disappeared.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 9:19:33 PM
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rebelyell
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Here's a poem that I have written. it's not really a song (yet) because i haven't put music to it. here it is:
Thankful For My God
Thank you, O Father,
For saving me from Satan’s lies.
Without you I would have believed them,
And forever went to die.
Thank you, O Jesus,
For saving me from damnation,
Upon your back you bore my sin,
In those cruel lacerations.
You allowed your body to be broken.
Your blood freely flowed away.
O my God, let me never forget it,
Never, ever any day.
Your body was nailed
To a rough wooden cross.
For your elect you died!
You had suffered much loss.
“Eloi! Eloi! Lama sabacthani!”
Our worthy Lord did cry.
He did not have very much time
Before he would have to die.
“It is finished!”
The worthy lips uttered.
“Make sure he’s dead,”
Some soldier muttered.
A spear pierced his side,
Out of which ran,
Blood and water,
Fluids poured out for man.
This is not the end, though.
He did not stay killed.
For he was stronger than death,
He rose as the Father willed.
Thank you, O Holy Spirit,
For saving my soul from hate.
Before the world began,
You had set my fate.
I cannot save myself,
That’s one thing no one can do.
Only the Spirit can raise us from death,
And for doing so I thank you.
I am totally depraved,
Apart from you, O LORD.
I am absolutely dead,
Without, O God, your word.
Many Jesus freaks have died for you.
Was I ever called to do so,
Give me strength, O my God,
To never deny you.
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If ye ain't mor keerful, ah'll be a aimin' this 'ere same gun at ye!
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/12/2008 9:55:27 PM
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Holybattleaxe
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that was good rebelyell =} and thank you for liking mine *hugs*
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/19/2008 6:04:42 AM
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RatherDashing
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So, this is the second sermon I've ever written. Here goes...
LIFE, THE UNIVERSE, AND EVERYTHING (catchy, eh?  )
In the beginning...
A beginning; the point of time or space at which anything begins. For something to be, it must first have a source of origin on it's introduction into time or space. Usually the best place for finding the source is to view the elements of that which was formed.
According to theological accounts, the beginning originated with the source, God, constructing the fabric and furniture of our vast universe. These accounts are based upon what is written in Genesis 1:1, as it describes how everything came to be, and was, and now is. This account gives us an idea of origination with a source, though leaving a lot of questions open for further examination.
As stated before, a beginning is the point of time or space at which anything begins. While time began with the production of two elements, the heavens and the earth, with an intelligent designer crafting these two elements from complete nothingness.
For the understanding of origination, the source must first be understood. Which, in the theological account, is God.
Many of those defending their Christian beliefs often use the phrase, "I don't know how, I just know God did it.". This is a phrase that has been proved laughable to those of opposing beliefs, and that is due to the lack of information and presentation of evidence involved in their reasoning. If we Christians don't know "how", then how do we, in fact, know? The Bible presents us with this eternal figure of divinity, representing three distinct personalities into one unit, forming the Trinity (or Godhead). This infinite, eternal, self-existent Being described as the "First Cause of all that is". The Bible mentions that never was there a moment, not in a point of time or space, when God did not exist. God existed eternally and infinitely before formation came into order; in other words, origination.
For the common mind, the concept of an everlasting Being might seem far-fetched and illogical, and it is to those who have yet to comprehend the ever-so incomprehensible God. The mysteries of all things that are will never be unlockable to the human intelligence, because the logic of God is beyond fully understanding. With that in mind, this doesn't limit our ability to get an accurate description of who He is. Knowing who the Creator is only half a step into completely progress, knowing "how" is the other key.
Genesis 1:2 speaks about the earth being formless and empty, with darkness over the surface of the deep. At this point in the time, the universe had no order or formation. It was empty of all living creatures and void of all light. As verse 3 starts out, "and God said...", before God's word went forth, there was no prior existence. God continues to say, "Let there be light", and light came to be and seperated itself from darkness, calling the light "day", and the darkness He called "night". This was day one.
Creation furthered continued from day two to day four, it was as followed:
Day 2: Expanse - the expansion to the atomsphere between the water on earth and the clouds.
Day 3: Dry ground/vegetation - the seperation of land and the seas, with seed-bearing plants and trees on the land.
Day 4: Light-bearers - the creation of two great lights; the sun (the greater light, made to govern the day), and the moon (the lesser light, made to govern the night). Among them was formed the stars, seperated in expanse of the universe to give light to the earth, and to also seperate day from night. The sun, moon, and the stars were placed into space to provide signs to mark seasons, days, and years.
Living creatures and humanity was then created in:
Day 5: Fish and birds - including every great creature of the sea and every winged bird according to their kind.
Day 6: Animals and humans - including every wild animal according to their kinds.
After the creation of livestock and various other animals, man was formed. A conversation took place in verse 26 amongst the Trininty, saying: "Let us make man in our image, in our likeness, and let them rule over the fish of the sea and the birds of the air, over the livestock, over all the earth, and over all the creatures that move along the ground."
Thus, God created man in His own image, in the image of God He created him; male and female He created them. Never by chance was humanity a random chance of occurence or product of evolution. The design of humans was specifically produced in the likeliness of its Creator.
With this given information, you should know and be able to verify:
1. The Source.
2. The Origination.
Contrary to the popular naturalistic selection theories, which suggest humanity began 4 billion years ago by random chance and a single organism (prokaryotes) evolved throughout that periodical table, the concept is compelling but also leaving many questionable gaps.
These human originated theories are ideas. Whereas God's word is reason and promise.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/19/2008 10:53:33 AM
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pk07
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Good job, Randycat.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/19/2008 4:51:29 PM
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RatherDashing
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I know right?
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/19/2008 10:49:33 PM
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stephiroth
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Of course.
Wish my political stuff turned out so good.
I'm in a midlife crisis. But for teenagers.
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RE: Share what you've written - 4/22/2008 9:27:44 PM
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Tonight is the last night that I will walk alone. tonight is the last night i will call this place my home. i have fought many windmills, and chased after wind. i've clasped my hands around nothing again and again. we're all just bleeding to death from self inflicted wounds. we're all obtainting careers to provide our dooms. blindfolded and naive. lay our treasures in our fireplaces. place our children on the train tracks and pull the wool over their faces. i have made some twin with selfish ambition and thread. and sewed up my cuts before i'd be dead. i tied knots with faith in the world and myself. living for pleasure and toiling for wealth. i played outside for years with a butterfly net. chasing the wind every day before the sun set. then i cried into my pillow and clinched my fists, and looked for new things to sew up my wrists. ignoring the voice that whispered "goodnight sweetheart.." i refuse to admit the stitches are coming apart.
the years all went by and i am alone, everything has turned to dust that i called my own. i can't find something worth anything as far as i can see, the jars for the wind i've been chasing are empty. nothing in this world has lasted or put hope in my heart, the stitches have unraveled and are coming apart.
just beneath my wrists i watched this scarlet puddle grow. i can't find anything more that i can use to sew. at the end of my rope is a dangling noose, i have tied while living for nothing, and found nothing of any use. i am tired of fighting windmills and i'm tired of chasing the wind, i will not open my hands to find nothing ever again.
then His voice whispered to me before i closed my eyes, "i have already given You my life, so why is it that you chose to die?" then i saw Him there standing over me, i covered my wrists, afraid that he would see. i couldn't look in His eyes and i felt so ashamed. i tried to hide all the blood colored stains. and my voice was shaking as i started to cry, i could feel that soon i was going to die. "i have nothing to fill all the holes in my heart ... the stitches have unraveled and are coming apart. i have chased after wind for a very long time, still i have nothing worth saying is mine. everything i did was for nothing and now i'm bleeding to death. and when I'll be dead i will still not have rest." as the blood ran down like the tears in my eyes, the only thing i have heard that has freedom from lies, spilled over His lips on to me. pale and broken. of all of the words i have heard to be spoken. all of the sorrow and all the regret. the years, the toil, the butterfly nets, this wasted life and all of this ... this never ending emptiness ... washed away below my arms in the blood that poured down, the thread and the stitches fell to the ground. His words blanketed me as my pain reached it's end, "I've loved you forever, and my love never ends."
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With anything, anytime, anywhere
And the half of me is all about apathy
And the other half just doesn't care...
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