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Sirach -> RE: Share what you've written (11/6/2005 2:38:40 AM)
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Eww... I found some really old poetry. It just plain sucks because this is from my grade 8 year, but here it is. Both of them had the same rhyme scheme, and the second one is unfinished (the starred lines are the ones I wanted to change in the past). Ka 'Aina Lani (This Heavenly Land) My mind invoked a land of Eden, Within one dreamless sleep of mine. A place of beauty, ageless pleasure, Granted by the Great Divine. Like paradise beyond our senses, Ne’er before have I conceived This earthly land of purest splendour, That my own eyes could be deceived! Endowed it was with foreign florae, Blossoms brought from heaven’s kiss, And every tree bore fragrant fruit That flowered round this garden bliss. Upon a clearing, I perceived The waves that tumbled from the sea. The azure waters shone like silver, As this peace came over me. Even beasts of land and ocean, Lived in love and harmony. Each creature the Divine created Never had to fear nor flee. This land was perfect, pure in virtue, Coexisting pleasantly. This was the land of paradise; The land without iniquity. Alas! My dream had ended early, When the sun rose from the deep. And for a while, I pondered gravely, Why this dream came from my sleep. Was this Atlantis? Avalon? Or just a deep desire of heart? This was the past of all mankind, For all had journeyed from this start. If all do realize our beginnings, Then we’ll know the source of all, For we can be a paradise, And this is mankind’s truest call. Lucifer In the dawn of new Creation Of the heavens blest above, Was an angel God created In an image of His love. Fashioned with His luminescence, Flowing from His breath divine, Life was given through His essence Into Heaven’s blessèd shrine. ~*~*~*~*~*~ Holy light shone vehemently From the work of angel hands As the Lord created wonders Dawning from the time of man. This bright angel, Lucifer, *Had bore the light of Father-God, *With eyes of fire that flickered and *His golden wings that spanned abroad. ~*~*~*~*~*~ His own beauty was alluring Like the aura of the sun Standing midst the grand Creation Of the Great and Holy One. Then, he saw this timid creature Loved by God much more than him, *Jealousy began corruption; *He would lead Man into sin. ~*~*~*~*~*~ Thinking that he could be greater Than the Father of the Sky, *He began to plan his evil, *Smirking in his mind’s reply. Gath’ring angels in defiance As a battle would occur, Soon the heavens were divided ‘Tween God’s law and Lucifer. ~*~*~*~*~*~ War began as Heaven trembled; Callously, the thunder roared As the angels fought the rebels, Sided by their fallen lord. But, alas! He was defeated Smitten by the Father’s hand And was banished with his rebels To our earthly, God-made land. ~*~*~*~*~*~ But his plan was not completed, Not ‘til death was introduced. He would poison Woman’s thinking *And God’s fury would be loosed. Taking form into a serpent, Slithered he onto the ground. *On the tree of good and evil *knowledge did he wrap around. ~*~*~*~*~*~ There was Eva, walking yonder, ‘Mongst the fruits of paradise. *Little did God’s Eva know *Of Lucifer’s corrupted vice. When she wandered close enough The serpent spoke to her. *“Has God said, that ‘You cannot eat *Of any tree, for sure?’” ~*~*~*~*~*~ “Nay.” Eve spoke replying forward. *“Any we may eat and try. But if it is this tree you speak Of, we may not eat, lest we die.” “But you may not die” spoke the serpent. “Gods you shall become” he said. “And you will know of wisdom and Receive immortal life instead.” ~*~*~*~*~*~ And so, believing he was trusting, Taking all his words as true, In her hand, she ate the fruit, *And gave it to her husband too. Lo! Behold! Their eyes were opened
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